Commentary Example

http://media.www.dailycampus.com/media/storage/paper340/news/2005/10/21/Commentary/Video.Games.Do.Not.Cause.Violence-1029668.shtml

This would be a very good commentary to use as an inspiration for my own. It has the same view as my commentary, and uses much of the same data that I have. The style of the commentary, along with the fact that it is the same topic as mine, would give me a template that would help the flow of my commentary.

The commentary sets up a scene that introduces a person who is very prevalent in the topic. He brings out examples for what Jack Thompson is attacking, and tells how they do not work the way that he would like them to. He uses studies to back up his opinion and degrade the opposing opinion. in the end, he talks about a way to fix everything, even if that way is already there and the people against his view just decide to ignore this way.

~ by alazkan on October 29, 2008.